Saddle the Wind Chapter 1
Heath stood quietly near the fireplace, sipping his drink and watching his new family, although the Barkleys didn’t yet feel like his family. He’d been at the ranch not quite three weeks, three weeks...
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I love the 'early Heath' stories .. and what a perfect photo to go along with this one.
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I like the beginning. I hope Heath can, eventually, feel at home with the Barkleys. I love the picture.
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Great start on this story. [i]He ached to explain why he was the man he was, to have them understand, and to understand them in return. But his taciturn nature, hardened into steel by Carterson,...
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A fantastic start! I absolutely love early Heath days with his new family. There is so much you can do with it. Heath's feelings really ring true as to how he probably felt early in his relationship...
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Nice start to the story; I'm eager to see where you go with this one. Some place interesting, I know.
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I've just been wondering when we might have another WW story, and here it is! And a great start. I'm looking forward to finding out what way you go with this tale. relief that, for a few days,...
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I wonder what will happen in the lind shack? Great start! And I also love the picture.
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A melancholy meandering through Heath's thoughts, nicely done. Love the pic.
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Great start! I love stories about Heath's arrival at the ranch and his somewhat difficult integration into the family...I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll be taking us with this. Thanks...and...
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Great start ! Heath seems to be using this time away to make a decision on just 'who' he is. Both lives pull at him with their pros and cons. Heath is definitely not a happy camper. Loved the picture!
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He was no longer Heath Thomson, completely, but far from being Heath Barkley, far from being a part of his father's family. What will it take for Heath to bridge that gap? Intriguing beginning...
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I like this - what a great intro! I'll be looking for more of this story. And I love the title. I am so not good at titles.
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Great start!! Love the Heath in your story. Can't wait to read more!
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love the photo...nicely done.Great title, I love the image and it suits Heath.Nice intro to his thoughts and uncomfortableness in adjusting to such a different life than he'd known. I like that he...
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Haven't read here in awhile. What a great story to start off with! Love young Heath stories.
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